I posted this on the forum in the art section but i thought i mite aswell post it here too, the link does work so i would like to know what everones thoughts are, i am going to make a short with this as a one off, stand alone cartoon! if you have any ideas of how to improve to i would love to here them too!

Here is the link! lets hope my bandwidth holds because it is geocities!

Below is a screen shot of the the flash that is linked above, it is only about 20 seconds long!